We pow-wowed on her basement carpet,
Colorful, printed pajama pants on every point of
Our friendship-circle. The movie had been over
For quite awhile, the TV still glowing a blank,
Blue screen. Bowls of buttered popcorn lay abandoned
In the couch cushions. She curled in our center: her
Friends, her classmates, her peers. Our concern
Leapt across the circle every which way, weaving a
Web of whispers around her. She shivered, but it
Wasn't from the chill in the air. We had left our
Girl-talk, our weekly gossip, the new boy at school,
Our appalling parents; instead we feasted upon
One of us. She was the bonfire and we gladly
Warmed ourselves, rubbing our hands.
She began slowly; we listened, as all good friends do.
She continued, and choking, she spat out bits of
Thread and yarn, unraveling before our eyes.
Stained, old carpet absorbed her tears, begging us to
Knit her back together, but we could only fight
Over the moist strands of her story.
















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I love your poetry. Get published
She continued, and choking, she spat out bits of
Thread and yarn, unraveling before our eyes.
Stained, old carpet absorbed her tears, begging us to
Knit her back together, but we could only fight
Over the moist strands of her story.
ohy... your images are so much more powerful and descriptive than anybody else.
::moves onto your next deviation::
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it's time to trust my instincts; close my eyes and leap. it's time to try defying gravity.
i think i'll try defying gravity and you can't pull me down.
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My baby
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victim, victim, victim.
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